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Elijah
Feb 25, 2015 19:03:10 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2015 19:03:10 GMT -5
Elijah
33 ● MALE ● STRAIGHT ● CIVILLIAN ● HYBRID (Werepire)
SPECIES INFORMATION
Abilities ✔ Extreme Sense of Smell, can smell blood from 10 miles away ✔ Strength, Can move things up to 10 times his weight ✔ Null Sun, due to his werewolf gene, the sun affects him 75% less than a normal vampire ✔ Endurance, his werewolf gene gives him 2 times the endurance of a vampire ✔ Five
| Weaknesses ✘ Relies on other human or supernatural beings blood for strength ✘ Burned silver, silver that has been burned will kill him on contact, no matter if it pierces him or not. Normal silver can kill him as well ✘Full moon, Werewolf gene becomes stronger, causing him to go berserk during a full moon. ✘ Ice burns him due to him having the Werepire hybrid gene ✘ Loud noises hurt his ears, certain higher pitches can stun him also making him vulnerable |
Elijah is a Werepire hybrid, which is a cross between vampire and werewolf. Originally, he was a werewolf and started in a normal pack. He then fought a vampire who forced him to drink his blood, transforming Elijah into a Werepire hybrid. Becoming part vampire made Elijah have greater sense of smell and made his strength increase. Due to his Vampire gene, he can no longer take on his Werewolf form, although his eyes will change to silver when it is a full moon. He will also become enraged during a full moon, causing him to lose any sanity he has and turn into a raging beast, while staying in his vampire form. The only way to stop his enraged mode is to kill him, unless he is confided and isolated from EVERYONE.PERSONALITY POSITIVE ✔ Is a complete gentleman ✔ He is extremely aware and precise about hygiene, he loves to stay clean ✔ He isn't quick to judge other beings based on appearance ✔ Independent ✔ Reserved to himself
| NEGATIVE ✘ Intimidating at first ✘ Dislikes his Werewolf gene ✘ Doesn't love easily ✘ Too secretive ✘ Rarely shows his emotions
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Elijah is quiet and seems mysterious. He will not start a conversation with anyone but will listen to people to hear what he needs to hear. Elijah is quick to react and often will if someone innocent is in need. He suppresses his strengths and speed. If one comes along they can gravely injure him if he falls in love with them.APPEARANCE POSITIVE ✔ Longish black hair ✔ Hazel eyes ✔ Muscular/Athletic build ✔ Charming ✔ 6’ 2”
| NEGATIVE ✘ There is a scar on his chest where his “heart” is ✘ Eyes turn yellow when he is angered ✘ People tend to stay away from him because of his intimidation features ✘ Four ✘ Five |
[font size=“1”Elijah is tall and masculine. He dresses in suits and is attractive in his appearance. he has a smooth voice and devilish charm. This causes him to be intimidating to men and extremely charming to women, he uses this to his advantage. He is no where to be found during the full moon, though.
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MISCELLANEOUS INFO OCCUPATION: N/A. POSITION: N/A STATUS: Known to very few EXTRAS: Please talk about anything else you feel the need to explain here!
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PyroKitten
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Elijah
Feb 25, 2015 20:08:13 GMT -5
Post by Akeekitty on Feb 25, 2015 20:08:13 GMT -5
Theres a few things I would like to address before I approve this bio. The first and easiest thing to fix is your character's race name. Just labelling your guy a Hybrid doesn't cut it. Hybrid is a very general term, any being that has the mix of two different species can fall into that category. Its not enough to really define your character. Make a name for your character's race that is more unique and will help me put it up on the species list for others to see. The other, more serious problem I see with this character is his powers. For a being who is both a mix of vampire and werewolf he seems to lack most, if not all the powers associated with either of his species. On top of that what abilities that are listed are either completely unrelated to vampires or werewolves, or aren't actually powers at all (i.e. being a master vertical fighter, intelligence, etc.) It seems odd to me that there isn't much there for someone so unique. Hell, there should at least be some weaknesses or conflicts with his powers. Since he is part vampire does he have their vulnerability with the sun? How extreme is it? Can he still take on a werewolf form? If so was there any alterations to his form because of the vampire blood? Take a look at the Species List here to see the strengths and weaknesses for both sides to help you figure out what to do. The one power that I can address here is Elijah's Godspeed. While vampires are suppose to be fast, and we can for the sake of argument say that him being a hybrid he gets the benefit of being faster than the average vampire, that does not mean that he should be able to travel at the speed of light. That is just too overpowered, most of the supernaturals that exist in RS don't have anything close to that kind of level of speed, that includes ones that can teleport (Who have a lot of limitations with teleporting to compensate for it). That is about it for problems I see here. 1. Fix the powers to include strengths and weakness of both vampires and werewolves that would fit for a hybrid of the two. 2. Remove any of the strengths and weaknesses that have nothing to do with his species powers (i.e. Martial arts skills, love, etc.). This only needs to be done from the list at the very top. You can add in the paragraph below what kind of combat training he has learned over time. 3. Give the hybrid species a name and a description. Feel free to poke me in the cbox, message here, or PM me whenever those changes have been made and I will look it over and approve your application once that is done. <3
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PyroKitten
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Elijah
Mar 2, 2015 22:04:54 GMT -5
Post by Akeekitty on Mar 2, 2015 22:04:54 GMT -5
This bio is APPROVED!
Don't forget to post in the Playby list. Welcome to RS <3
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