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Onyxia
Sept 22, 2014 23:46:50 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2014 23:46:50 GMT -5
Onyxia
99 ● FEMALE ● PANSEXUAL ● CIVILIANS ● DRAGONKIN
SPECIES INFORMATION
Abilities ✔ Black leathery wings can grow from her back while in her humanoid form; especially useful if she needs to be more discreet when flying. ✔ Can breathe fire in her draconic form and create/bend/manipulate it in her humanoid form. Her fire is green, any fire she manipulates will turn green. ✔ Immortal, wounds heal very fast. ✔ Extremely keen senses. ✔ Telekinetic. Can open doors and move/lift just about anything the size of her draconic form. The larger/heavier the object, the more energy and focus it requires - as with moving a living creature. She can't lift up things much larger than her, but she can give them a good shove. She cannot move objects that aren't within her line of sight.
| Weaknesses ✘ Sensitive to loud sounds (vacuums, machinery, even loud music). ✘ Also sensitive to others' emotions, picking up on feelings such as anxiety, anger, and sadness. Sometimes, it can cause her own mood to change. ✘ Small wounds like scrapes and even deep cuts can heal within a day or less. Broken bones or sprains will take a week to heal, more or less. She cannot regenerate severed limbs, but her tail would grow back like a lizard's. ✘ Susceptible to cold. Her body temperature is higher than a human's, and if she gets too cold, she can become very ill. ✘ Being submerged or completely soaked renders her unable to use her fire abilities, though she only takes a few minutes to dry in her draconic form, as her scales are a little bit water resistant.
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Dragonkin are essentially just dragons with a humanoid form. They always will have draconic horns protruding from their head in their humanoid form, making them hard to miss. Their magical abilities vary greatly, but all of them are able to breathe fire or ice. They can shift from dragon to humanoid at will, but sometimes with intense emotions like anger, they can shift quickly and unexpectedly. Most dragonkin have the ability to sprout draconic-like wings from their back, perfect for escaping areas where they can't transform into their larger draconic form. The size of their draconic forms also vary, but they rarely get bigger than ten or fifteen feet at the shoulder.
Despite being immortal, they can die just like any other creature, due to wounds that are too great to heal on their own, infection, or illness. Their diets are usually purely carnivore or even omnivore, as sometimes they enjoy eating fruit. They shy away from vegetables, however.PERSONALITY POSITIVE ✔ Intelligent. ✔ Protective. ✔ Witty. ✔ Kind. ✔ Independent.
| NEGATIVE ✘ Buttons are easily pushed. ✘ Distrusting. ✘ Mischievous (could be good or bad depending on how you look at it). ✘ Sense of entitlement. ✘ Impulsive when angry.
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APPEARANCE BASICS ✔ 5'10" ✔ Dark brown hair, usually tucked up and hidden under her headdress. ✔ Curved horns protruding from her head. ✔ Pale skin. ✔ Has the sharpest of cheekbones.
| FEATURES/OTHER ✘ Intense blue-green eyes, shining a more bright green when using her magic. ✘ Red lips, like rose red. ✘ Slightly long, unpainted nails, neatly filed to a rounded tip. ✘ Winter attire. Regular attire. ✘ Draconic form.
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MISCELLANEOUS INFO OCCUPATION: n/a POSITION: n/a STATUS: Known supernatural, kind of hard to hide it with those horns! EXTRAS: n/a
OUT OF CHARACTER INFO
Playby: Angelina Jolie Previous Character: n/a Player Handle: Nightmare Out of Character Account: clickie |
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PyroKitten
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Onyxia
Sept 23, 2014 19:10:41 GMT -5
Post by Akeekitty on Sept 23, 2014 19:10:41 GMT -5
Just a few things I want to address before I approve this application. The major flaw over all with this app I can see is your character is her weaknesses. To put it bluntly she doesn't have enough. Given how much things you listed that she can do and how powerful some of those abilities are not having many flaws that balance them out is a problem. Some of these are easy enough to fix. For example with her fire powers I am sure dealing with water can make it harder or even impossible for her to use that power. Her healing powers should have a limit or at least explained in better detail. How fast can she heal from serious injuries? Does it drain her physically having to heal from a lot of damage? Can she regenerate limbs? If so is growing back limbs painful?
The biggest problem with her powers I have is with the telekinetic powers. While the weight capacity limit is a good touch, it still needs some work. Like with the healing powers it would make sense that using telekinesis would be draining on her, probably more draining than anything else she can do. Another common flaw most people use for telekinetic powers is what type of things they can move. i.e. being unable to move living things, or objects out of their line of sight. Some of these would be good to add here, or anything else you can possibly think of.
Just fix these problems and post here when you are done, or PM me to inform me that you made the changes and I will get back to you as soon as I can.
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Onyxia
Sept 23, 2014 23:25:27 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2014 23:25:27 GMT -5
I was having a hard time thinking of weaknesses, but you helped me out a lot actually! If you need me to add more/tweak something, let me know. :3
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PyroKitten
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Onyxia
Sept 24, 2014 13:45:14 GMT -5
Post by Akeekitty on Sept 24, 2014 13:45:14 GMT -5
Looks good now ^^
**APPROVED**
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